That Other Life by Everett M Standa


       THAT OTHER LIFE                   



      I have only faint memories
      Memories of those days when all our joyful moment
      In happiness, sorrow and dreams
      Were so synchronized
      That we were in spirit and flesh
      One soul;

      I have only faint memories
      When we saw each other’s image everywhere;
      The friends, the relatives,
      The gift of flowers, clothes and treats,
      The evening walks where we praised each other,
      Like little children in love;

      I remember the dreams about children
      The friendly neighbors and relatives
      The money, the farms and cows
      All were the pleasures ahead in mind
      Wishing for the day of final union
      When the dreams will come true

      On that day final union
      We promised each other pleasures and care
      And everything good under the sun
      As a daily reminder that you and me were one forever.

Analysis
      The persona is a lover (a Man or a Woman)” The evening walks where we praised each other,--“ Like little children in love;” The day of the final union reminds the persona of joy/peace/ pleasure and care he was promised and promised (the last stanza 4). He/she has faint memories of joyful moments / when they felt like one / when they saw each other’s image everywhere / and loved each other like little children.

      The persona and partner felt happy in spite of happiness or sorrow for both had one hope in life, to be happy and united in purpose. They were innocent about their feelings towards making each other feel loved / flattered. HE/ she hoped for a life of prosperity loaning money / farms / cows.

      The persona seems to regret towards his marriage he feels that they’ve not lived unto the promises they made to each other.
       Aspects of style used in this poem: Simile - ‘we praised...like little children in love’ – This brings out the sense of deep love they had for each
        Repetition – ‘I have only faint memories’ - The repetition emphasizes the persona’s feelings of regret.

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